Chase "Ice" Chang
Entering Hogwarts
Slytherin Student - 1st Year
~*Chase*Chang*~
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Post by Chase "Ice" Chang on Feb 11, 2004 20:58:22 GMT -5
Hermione turned her computer on and waited for it to get set up. After if was set up she clicked on the AOL icon and logged on. She first went and checked her mail. She got one from someone she didn't know but the title was, "Hi Hermione, baby." She wondered who it could be so she clicked the mail open and started to read it. It said, Dear Hermione,
Baby, miss me? I missed you. I'm coming over to your house. Can't wait to see you again! in the beginning of the letter it sounded like Harry wrote it but as she read on she was wrong. And Hermione.. if you try to lock me out... I'll KILL you!!!!!!!!! You know you miss me so don't try anything funny..
Love,
You know who
Hermione read the letter over and screamed to herself. Her parents weren't home and Ron and Harry went to Romania. She turned off her computer quickly and ran down stairs. She ran to the front door and locked it and then she ran to the back door and locked that. She also went and locked all the windows. She was scared. She didn't know what to do. She ran back up to her room and looked out the window to see a black figure in her back yard trying to get in. She screamed
Well? What did ya think??
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Post by Luna Lestrange on Feb 12, 2004 16:56:34 GMT -5
Oh my God, that was creepy! Write more!
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Post by Jordan Warbeck on Feb 12, 2004 17:08:19 GMT -5
please do!!! ;D
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Steph Darkstorm
Entering Hogwarts
Hufflepuff Student - 1st Year
I am weird so what! you got a problem with that fine then u suck
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Post by Steph Darkstorm on Feb 12, 2004 17:30:43 GMT -5
Yah that was really scarey and please right more Steph said
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Jewel Stewart
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Slytherin Student - 1st Year
Jewel Stewart
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Post by Jewel Stewart on Feb 12, 2004 19:55:09 GMT -5
I say, slow down a bit, you sort of jumped right in and didnt give us time to feel like we know all about Hermione, even if we do from JKR. Other than that, great job!
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Chase "Ice" Chang
Entering Hogwarts
Slytherin Student - 1st Year
~*Chase*Chang*~
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Post by Chase "Ice" Chang on Feb 16, 2004 12:55:57 GMT -5
Ah... True but thanks!
Hermione panicked. The figure had a long bar or something in his hand. She was freaked. She ran over to her desk and took out a piece of parchment and a quill. She quickly wrote a letter to harry and ron. Dear Harry and Ron,
I know you guys are away but I need you! Someone is trying to get in and my parents aren't home! Please please please get here as soon as possible!!!
Hermione
Some of the words were smeared from tears, she walked to her owl and sent it to Harry and Ron. She heard glass shatter and she ran down stairs and walked to the kitchen doorway croutching so the figure couldn't he couldn't see Hermione. "Hermy.. Baby.. C'mon out.. You locked the door and you know what's going to happen to you now..." Called a creepy voice. Hermione sobbed silently and stood up and ran to her parents room and locked the door. She sat on her parents bed hugging her knees tightly. She heard footsteps..
More comments! Wat do ya think?
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Post by Jordan Warbeck on Feb 16, 2004 19:50:28 GMT -5
must-read-more! ;D.....it was great!!keep going!please!
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HermioneWeasley
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Gryffindor Student - 3rd Year
I am a auror and I am ready to fight the DeathEater who killed my Mother
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Post by HermioneWeasley on Feb 18, 2004 7:32:41 GMT -5
REAL CREEPY WRITE MORE  |
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Chase "Ice" Chang
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Slytherin Student - 1st Year
~*Chase*Chang*~
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Post by Chase "Ice" Chang on Feb 18, 2004 19:49:12 GMT -5
The foot steps got closer and Closer and CLOSER. Hermine was terrified. She started breathing quickly not knowing what to do. Oh my God. Oh my God! What do I do? She heard something in the front yard and saw her parents Ron and Harry running to the front door. She saw her parents unlock the door. The footsteps went down stairs to see what the noise was. She opened the door a crack and saw the figure wasn't there and she heard yelling and fighting down stairs. She flung the door open wide and ran down the stairs grabbing a metal bar that the figure dropped and ran to where everyone was fighting.
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Post by Jordan Warbeck on Feb 18, 2004 20:32:38 GMT -5
Please rite more!!
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Post by Jordan Warbeck on Feb 18, 2004 20:33:20 GMT -5
sorry!!
*write
lol
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Steph Darkstorm
Entering Hogwarts
Hufflepuff Student - 1st Year
I am weird so what! you got a problem with that fine then u suck
Posts: 26
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Post by Steph Darkstorm on Feb 18, 2004 20:45:50 GMT -5
Write more it was really scary
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